Breathe in (Breathe out) take 2

I've re-recorded the song today - trying some different approaches (although the arrangement is the same).  I've decided the song's finished, but it's not a normal song.  It's meant to be used in worship - or maybe in a business session of the Assembly or a Synod that needs a circuit breaker - as a lead into a period of silence.  I envisage the instrumental part following the two verses going for a few stanzars and becoming very spare and quiet for 5 minutes or so.  It would then gradually come back, as it does after the bridge in the recorded version.  Who knows if it would work?!

Breathe In (Breathe Out) 12 Feb 2012